Observation

Ii decided to experiment with my writing style and create a short prose story that was more poetic in its narrative. This is a sexy change from my more breezy style. I wanted a break away that was uniquely a blend of my poetry skills. I gets lots of comments on the poetry, but it doesn't really sell. Here's what I noticed: In spite of it being experimental, I kept trying to edit it to make it regular prose. It's experimental fiction!!! How quickly I forgot. I am breaking my comfort zone. Gonna keep it experimental. Gonna keep it flowing like it does. Did I mention its an erotic story? Yes it is. Mind you, not a single dirty word can be found in this prose.