Been handwriting out the new scenes. They read very fresh, and exciting, but I am biased. The true test will be when I let the pages “cool” and read them with fresh eyes. I can say the story has a livelier viewpoint with more emotional wording. I need to type it out if I want to have a full on experience.
Did I mention that it’s a very erotic and suggestive story? Honestly, while I leave a lot to the imagination, there are some metaphors that are so clear, and imagery so potent that your mind’s eye is filled with some good visuals. The dialogue needs smoothing too.
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