Cool Down Moment

I've been thinking about my six chapter comic. Its completed, but I decided to write a sequal to the six chapters. I also decided to revise how the proposal is, as I got some good ideas from the YABS forum. Also, now that I have had time to not think of my project, I have had some minor ideas. I am redoing/modifying the character descriptions as needed. I want it to read as clear as possible, and now have the clarity to do so. :-)