Editing

Decided to edit my proposal. I have divided it into three parts. The first was the concept, second was the background. The last part was the series content. I will have to let it cool down for a while before I can have an opinion on it. I need to re-write the synopis part between tonight and tomorrow. I think the cast list can stand as is. All I can do is tweak that information. I've said pretty much all I can about the characters.