I got to chapter 2 and rewrote it. Some of the characters are much more dynamic, and others have some good background to them. I need to look over a scene or two, and decide if its worthy of staying the same or no. It depends on the break I take from it to look it over. Some of the characters have evolved, and asserted themselves in ways I didn't think about before. I was pleasantly surprised.
I've got to get to chapter 3 today. I want to see what I can improve with this part. I know already that the character changes in ch. 2 affect what goes on,
so I already have some work ahead of me. :-)
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